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Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Acrostic poem

Remember to chuck it in the bin.
E very one has to purua to potae.
S trive to succeed and you will never find things hard.
Play in the right way.
Eat healthy food so you don’t get sick
Champions will never give up.
Take charge of your self and your class room.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Vaifoa, nice story made an amazing job on your peom it's great. Theres one thing that you made a mistake on is that you made a space on the E and S try not put spaces there next time. Other than that I liked it you have the skills.

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  2. Wow Vaifoa, I really enjoyed reading your story. You have a very funny picture there. I look forward to your next amazing story. Keep it up!

    From Uili

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  3. Hi Vaifoa,

    Your RESPECT (r e s p e c t) acrostic poem to me was cool and funny! Do you think that for P it could've been Puroto to portie? Make sure to visit my blog!

    Thanks
    Iisa

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    1. Hi Iisa


      Wow Iisa I really like the dragon, Its fantastic.
      Keep up the good work you have done there.
      You have done good instructions for making Chinese
      candy.

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