- We have been reading the story The Ant Army by Val Neubecker which has illustrations by Tony Anderson who uses photos and drawings together like this one I have created.
Friday, October 26, 2012
The Ant Army
Jack and Jill
One day there lived Jack and Jill. They were on their way walking around the forest. They were on a mission finding bigfoot. When they were walking Jack heard a noise it was coming from the bushes. He went close to the bush and found a little bird that fell from the tree so he put the bird back into its nest and went back.
“What were you doing?” said Jill.
He answered that he was putting a little bird back to its nest. As they were talking to each other they heard a growling sound. They realised it was bigfoot running towards them. They started to scream and ran back.
When they were running they saw a sign that said exit. So they ran to the exit sign and hide for two minutes till bigfoot goes away. “How are we going to get that big thing” said Jack. It is going to take a while to find him around this place. When bigfoot was gone they hurried to the bush finding some sharp materials to catch bigfoot. “LETS GO!!!” said Jill. So they went to find him. After a while Jack and Jill caught bigfoot in their trap. And then they took it to the wild where every wild animal lives. And they lived happily ever after.
“What were you doing?” said Jill.
He answered that he was putting a little bird back to its nest. As they were talking to each other they heard a growling sound. They realised it was bigfoot running towards them. They started to scream and ran back.
When they were running they saw a sign that said exit. So they ran to the exit sign and hide for two minutes till bigfoot goes away. “How are we going to get that big thing” said Jack. It is going to take a while to find him around this place. When bigfoot was gone they hurried to the bush finding some sharp materials to catch bigfoot. “LETS GO!!!” said Jill. So they went to find him. After a while Jack and Jill caught bigfoot in their trap. And then they took it to the wild where every wild animal lives. And they lived happily ever after.
Thursday, October 25, 2012
MY LUNCHBOX
Inside my lunch box is a apple Lasagna sandwich. It is amazing having a lunch box with delicious meals inside. Lunch boxes are very helpful to people because it keeps your lunch fresh and tidy. My lunch box is a grey lunch box and a black handle so you can take it outside.
Friday, October 19, 2012
Vincent And The Robber
On a sunny day there lived a man called Vincent he was going to the shops. As he was walking he bumped into a stranger whose name was Ronnie. He looked very evil when he turned to his side. Vincent said “sorry”, but he didn’t reply back. “What is he doing ?” said Vincent. So he just continued going to the shops.
When he came out with a packet of bread he realised there was a robber that was going towards him and stole his packet of bread. When the robber was running he said to himself “I saw that face before”. He stopped and thought what was his name. He recognised it was Ronnie with the evil face.
After the robber ran he called 111 and chased him down the road. Luckily he had a sleep gun with him and shot him in the back. “Yes!!!” he said as he went over to put him inside his car and drove to the police station.
“Where did he came from?” he said. The policeman answered he was a good man before but he decided to rob the shops. We were looking all around for him but we are so lucky you saved the day. And they lived happily ever after.
When he came out with a packet of bread he realised there was a robber that was going towards him and stole his packet of bread. When the robber was running he said to himself “I saw that face before”. He stopped and thought what was his name. He recognised it was Ronnie with the evil face.
After the robber ran he called 111 and chased him down the road. Luckily he had a sleep gun with him and shot him in the back. “Yes!!!” he said as he went over to put him inside his car and drove to the police station.
“Where did he came from?” he said. The policeman answered he was a good man before but he decided to rob the shops. We were looking all around for him but we are so lucky you saved the day. And they lived happily ever after.
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